The table below gives information about changes in modes of travel in England between 1985 and 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The table illustrates how the mode of travel changed in England between 1985 and 2000. Generally, compared to 1985, English travelled more in 2000, and they heavily relied on private cars for commuting.
Cars were by far the most popular modes of transport in both years in England. In 1985, the average distance travelled by English in a car was 3,199
miles
,
and 4806 Remove the comma
apply
miles
in 2000. On the other hand
, we can see that taxi was the least popular vehicle. Although
the travelling distance in 2000 using taxi
was above three times Correct article usage
a taxi
than
that of 1985, only 42 Change preposition
apply
miles
were travelled per person this
year, which was almost the same for the bicycle rides. No significant changes happened to some modes of travel, like walking and bicycle
between 1985 and 2000.
Wrong verb form
bicycling
According to
the table, in 2000 local
bus was used less than that Correct article usage
the local
of
1985. Only 274 Change preposition
in
miles
were travelled in 2000 by buses, which was 55 miles
fewer than that of
1985. Change preposition
in
In contrast
, the long-distance bus became more popular over time. Each person travelled 124 miles
by long-distance buses
in 2000 Fix the agreement mistake
bus
while
only 54 miles
in 1985.
In summary, English people travelled more distance in 2000 than in 1985. It is obvious that cars were the most popular mode of travelling.Submitted by yulyawashington on
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