The chart below shows the proportion of staff employed by age in the public sector in the UK in 2015 and 2020. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie chart illustrates the percentage of
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each age in the United Kingdom between 2015 and 2020.
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According to
the chart, it can be seen that the range
of 21-30 years
and over 50 was the similar portion is 23% while
the minority segment was the range
of under 21 years
approximately 14% of the workers in 2015.
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range
of 41-50 years
was rise 9% from 19% to 28%.
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it fell to 11% in 2020 so it calculated the minority sector in this
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