The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much
These pie charts illustrate how much a person consumes three types of nutrients
sodium
, saturated fats and added sugars in every meal on each day in the country United States of America.The data is in percentage.
Overall
,it is noticeable that each person used to have more sodium
and saturated fats in dinner
and however
,the sugar
consumption is high during the intake of snacks
.
Starting with sodium
,most individuals have this
particular nutrient at dinner
which contains 43% of their total meals.Breakfast and snacks
contain only 14% of the total soidum
consumption and 29% of lunch Correct your spelling
sodium
consist
of Correct subject-verb agreement
consists
sodium
.Moving on to the
saturated fat, Correct article usage
apply
this
kind of nutrients
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dinner
with
37% and lunch Change preposition
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to be
the second level with 26% and 21% of the fat Change the verb form
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have been
taken during the intake of Wrong verb form
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snacks
and 16% in the
breakfast.
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On the other hand
, added sugar
is mostly consumed as snacks
with the
higher percentage of 42% and Correct article usage
a
dinner
has 23% of added sugar
, although
, breakfast has the least amount of sugar
with 16% for starting a day.Submitted by insighttribez on
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