Do you feel that society will be able to cope with the increase in numbers of elderly people today and how can it be managed? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
As of today, we observe the population of older
people
is experiencing an uptrend which needs to be controlled by the governments in some ways. There are some justifications in this
regard and some suggested solutions which are going to be discussed in this
essay.
Self-evidently, every country consists of a diverse range of ages among people
which forms a standard community. However
, this
diversity should be somehow even in terms of different age groups. Unfortunately, the number of elderly people
is mounting currently due to
various reasons from lack of knowledge to financial and cultural problems. Primarily, there are steps that should be taken to counteract this
phenomenon like providing amenities to newborn children as well as
parents of these offspring. it can be like paying a special amount of money for those families each month to cover the expenses.
Even though seniors in society are very invaluable and precious, communities need more young people
in terms of their development and security. Therefore
, people
should be aware of the consequences of this
shortcoming in the long run. The media plays an important role in this
aspect and can convey the pitfalls that society may face with a lower rate of childbirth in the country. Another reason lies in the cultural preference of the residents, where they believe they do not require children and the world
should be stopped by humans one day and rather they cohabit with small animals such
as dogs and cats. Overall
, they are not persuaded to add to the world
's population.
In summary, needless to say, the world
needs balance in population and the lack of one age group will target a part of a community which will lead to some difficulties. As a result
, improving the families' financial situations as well as
their knowledge and beliefs will be very helpful and if these actions are not to be accomplished the world
's conditions will be exacerbated in the near future.Submitted by keyhan454 on
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