A local company is looking for people to do part-time work. You would like to work at the company in summer. Write a letter to the company manager. In your letter:•explain why you want to work there•say why you think you would be suitable for this work•give details of when you would be free to workWrite at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,
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Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing in regard to your vacancy for a sales representative, as advertised on the store's website.
As a student of hospitality management, I am looking to gain more customer service experience. I am particularly interested in working in sales.
Therefore
, this
position would suit me perfectly.I believe that my skills and background would make me a suitable candidate. Being a keen photographer myself, I have the required knowledge of the equipment to answer customers’ questions. My communication skills can be proven by the award for Best Waitress thatI
received Correct your spelling
that I
while
working at a French restaurant last
summer.As for my availability, the summer break at my university lasts from the beginning of June until the end of August. During those months, I could work flexible hours on weekdays. I will not, however
, be available on weekends.Thank you for your kind consideration. Please find my CV attached.YourSubmitted by raghavender1197 on
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Task Response
To enhance your task response, make sure to provide a more detailed explanation of why you want to work for the company, going beyond the job fitting your interests. Mention the specific aspects of the company that attract you.
Coherence and Cohesion
For coherence and cohesion, work on enhancing your letter's structure by ensuring a smooth transition between paragraphs. To do this, you could use linking words or phrases. Additionally, closing your letter appropriately with a more formal sign-off, like 'Yours faithfully' followed by your name, would improve your score.
The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,