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It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punsihment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? what sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behaviour to children?

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One of the relevant issues nowadays is to
learn
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 children the difference between right and wrong
since
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at
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young
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a young
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 age. Most people get used to
bring
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 up their
child
 via
punishment
. Personally, I tend to think that
punishment
 is not the only way to teach your
child
a
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good behaviour.
Firstly
, it is well known that
punishment
lead
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 to many issues.
For instance
, there may be problems with both physical and mental health.
Also
 arise different injuries that affect
on
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one
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 person.
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 fears of something, be it the fear of being beaten or making a mistake. A good case in point is if in childhood a
child
 was punished by being locked in the dark,
then
 over time he develops a fear of the dark, as
this
 is associated with bad memories.
Furthermore
, any
punishment
 can affect the
child
’s psyche over time. He may become closed, distant, or,
on the contrary
, show aggression towards people. I mean
this
, usually a person treats others the way others treat him. and the relationship between parent and
child
 is a great example
for
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this
.
Therefore
, it is important not to beat, not to intimidate, not to injure the
child
, as
this
 all leads to injury and will have a bad effect on the
child
’s condition.
Instead
, I advise you to calmly talk, explain,
tell
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 the reasons why he should not do
this
.
this
 method will help prevent various problems,
injuries
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and injuries
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 and improve the relationship between parent and
child
. If we talk about the types of
punishment
 that parents and teachers are allowed to use, I think that you should not use any
punishment
, as I said earlier there are alternative ways.
Finally
, we can come to the conclusion that
punishment
 is not the only way out. To raise a good generation you need to give an example of good behavior and treatment.
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