A magazine wants to include contributions from its readers for an article called ‘The book that influenced me most’. Write a letter to the editor of the magazine about the book that influenced you most. In your letter: • describe what this book was about • explain how this book influenced you • say whether this book would be likely to influence other people
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to recommend
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"India Independence" written by Abdul Kalam Azad as I admire this
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.
The book
is all about the movement for Indian Independence which covers all the political events from the formation of the Indian National Congress party to liberation from England. This
book
explains that it was a joint movement by all the indigenous ethnicities Hindus, Muslims, and Sikhs. Renowned activists Gandhi, Nehru, and Azad were imprisoned for 10 years.
They all were in favour of a united India which is why they came up with many ideas, especially the cabinet mission that ensures the autonomy of regions and states where only finance, defence, and foreign affairs were national subjects and all other powers were transferred to regions so they can exercise accordingly
.
It is a topic of interest for Indian, Pakistan, and Bangladesh citizens so they can know the facts about the whole struggle.
I look forward to hearing from you. Let me know if you need any further
information.
Yours faithfully,
Haris KhanSubmitted by kashikaranti on
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Expand your explanation on how the book influenced you personally. You've done well in describing the book but sharing your personal takeaways and how they impacted your thoughts or actions would make your letter more compelling.
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Consider adding a paragraph specifically dedicated to how this book might influence others, tying this back to your personal experience or offering a broader perspective on its potential impact.
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Try to use a variety of linking words and phrases to enhance the flow of your ideas from one paragraph to the next, making your letter more cohesive.
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Maintain a consistent and appropriate writing tone throughout your letter. While your tone is generally suitable, refining your greeting and closing can help enhance professionalism and respect.