You have just read an article in a national newspaper which claims that town centres in your country all look very similar to each other. You don't fully agree with this opinion. Write a letter to the editor of the newspaper. In your letter • say which points in the article you agree with • explain ways in which your town centre is different from most other town centres • offer to give a guided tour of your town to the writer of the article
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Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing
you
because I would like to give you my opinion on your article about town centres which you published in a national newspaper called Denik.
First of Change preposition
to you
all
I have to agree with the part where you mentioned a shape and an organization of main squares. Most of them have a rounded shape with lots of different shops around and Add a comma
all,
to
a fountain in the Change preposition
apply
center
.
Change the spelling
centre
However
, I found the center
of Brno quite different from most Change the spelling
centre
of
Change preposition
apply
other
cities. Mostly because it has nice older architecture combined with Add an article
the other
modern
style. Brno has Correct article usage
a modern
also
one unique difference that
is that a tram goes right across Correct pronoun usage
which
of
the middle of the main square. Change preposition
apply
Also
the main train station Add a comma
Also,
together with
tram
station is placed right under the main square, which is not so common in other cities.
Correct article usage
the tram
At
the end, I would like to offer a tour Change the preposition
In
in
Brno in Change preposition
of
hope
that it could change your opinion. If you decide to visit my town, please don't hesitate to contact me. I will be more than happy to show you the beauty of Correct article usage
the hope
this
city.
Yours faithfully,Submitted by jeeveshkb22 on
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Task Achievement
To further enhance your letter, try to provide more specific examples or details when discussing what makes your town unique. For instance, mentioning a particular building or event could offer a richer narrative.
Coherence and Cohesion
While your letter is well structured, consider including transitional phrases between paragraphs to improve the flow of information and make your argument even more persuasive.
Greeting and Closing
Your introduction and conclusion are clear and effective, providing a good opening and a cordial close to your letter.
Single Idea per Paragraph
You've successfully separated your response into coherent paragraphs, each focusing on a single idea, which greatly aids readability.
Suitable Writing Tone
Your tone is appropriately formal and respectful, suitable for a letter to a newspaper editor, contributing positively to the overall effect of your letter.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite