You have recently moved to another city but your bank has your old address and continues to send all the communication there. Write a letter to your bank Branch. In this letter mention: -Where you have moved? -What problem are you facing regarding the bank's communication? -What do you want them to do regarding old communication already sent to the wrong address

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Dear Sir or Madam, The reason why I am addressing you is to inform

that

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you that

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I have recently moved to London Baker Street 221b which is my new address. So I have some problems with your bank services

such

as continuing the connections with my old address and sending the notifications and reports. First of all, I am Asadbek Bozorov. I have recently moved from Liverpool to London. More precisely,

destination

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the destination

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of my house is Baker Street 221b near the Sherlock Holmes museum. Honestly speaking, because of moving, I am facing some issues with

bank's

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the bank's

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communication. Primarily, it is too far from my new home to use services easily. I can

also

say that some old communications have already

sent

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to the wrong address. Regarding the wrong communications, please resend them to me as soon as possible. For that, I would recommend moving my account to one of your branches near my place in London. Looking forward to your positive response. Yours faithfully, Asadbek Bozorov

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Excellent use of formal language suitable for writing to a bank.

coherence cohesion

The letter is well-organized, with a clear introduction, body, and closing.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
4Grammar mistakes
 

8 paragraphs

165 words

7.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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