Your local council is considering closing a sports and leisure centre that it runs, in order to save money. Write a letter to the local council. In your letter -Give details of how you and your friends or family use the centre -Explain why the sports and leisure centre is important for the local community -Describe the possible effects on local people if the centre closes.
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Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to express my deep concern regarding the termination of your service or
in other words
closing the only sport and leisure centre in this
area of the town.
Needless to say, this
place is the only reunion part for me and my friends to get together, experience splendid times and do some sport. In addition
, it is self-evident that everyone who is living in the modern city needs to do some physical exercise to maintain a healthy lifestyle However
, shutting this
place down will exacerbate the situation and will affect directly the living style of every individual. In addition
, it is obvious that the more such
centres exist the better the people's spirit and morale will be despite some possible limitations and restrictions on your side.
Thank you for considering my letter and I hope that this
centre is not going to be closed in the future.
faithfully yours,
Ebrahimi KeyhanSubmitted by keyhan454 on
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task achievement
Consider elaborating on how the centre uniquely benefits the community and your personal experiences in more detail.
coherence cohesion
Try to organize your thoughts more clearly by using paragraphs to separate different ideas.
greeting and closing
Your introduction and closing were properly formatted, setting a polite tone for the letter.
complete response
You made a clear argument against the closing of the sports and leisure centre, which fulfills the task.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite
