A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: give contact details for when you are away, give instructions about how to care for your pet, describe other household duties you would like your friend to undertake.
Dear Tim,
It's been a long time since we met. How are you doing? Anyways, thank you for agreeing to take care of my home and chotu
while
I'm
on vacation to India.
My flight has been scheduled at 7:00 pm, however
, I might be leaving my house around 3:00 pm to buy some food for my journey. I'm
gonna use my same whatsapp number while
I'm
in India. You can reach me out at anytime.
Can I ask you a favour or two? While
I'm
gonna, can you feed chotu three different meals a day? I know it sound shocking, but my cat loves to eat different food at different times and thats how i grew him. And don't forget to change the water in the cup, in which chotu likes to drink.
One more thing, there is a rose plant in my living area, can you water it everyday? And there will be newspaper delivery everymoring at the doorstep, don't forget to collect it, you may use it if you get boared.
I will return after 15 days, on 25th march to be specific at around 5:oo pm.
Best regardsSubmitted by hassan05.quadri on
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Coherence & Cohesion
Consider using more varied sentence structures and linking words to improve the flow of your writing.
Task Achievement
Try to elaborate a bit more on each instruction for your pet and household duties to enhance the completeness of your response.
Logical Structure
You've effectively structured the letter with a clear introduction, body, and closing.
Writing Tone
Your informal tone is suitable for the context of writing to a friend.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite