You and some friends ate a meal at a restaurant to celebrate a special occasion, and you were very pleased with the food and service. Write a letter to the restaurant manager. In your letter: give details of your visit to the restaurant explain the reason for the celebration say what was good about the food and the service Write at least 150 words.
Dear Sir/ Madam,
I am writing
this
letter to appreciate your food and your service
during our visit to your restaurant 'Kelsey's' on
commemoration of our very special day of my Change preposition
in
parents
anniversary.
I visited Change noun form
parent's
parents'
to
Kelseys during the supper meal with my 15 special guests on MarchRemove the preposition
apply
,
31, 2024. All the guests were welcomed cordially and respectfully. It was my first visit, I really loved the interior Remove the comma
apply
as well as
exterior
of the store as well.
Ultimately, the reason for the celebration was my Add an article
the exterior
parent's
40th anniversary, I really wanted to make Change noun form
parents'
this
day special for them. Therefore
, I invited all the special guests and decided
have a fabulous dinner.
Honestly, the Add the particle
decided to
service
of your restaurant was excellent, as soon as we entered the store, we were grabbed by two ladies, asking for details that how many customer
were there and Change to a plural noun
customers
then
they followed us to our seats and provided us with menu
. We were served Add an article
the menu
a menu
with
delicious food within 30 minutes Change preposition
apply
that
was really quick. They were readily available if we Correct pronoun usage
it
need
anything else during the meal. Wrong verb form
needed
Furthermore
, they give small gift
Fix the agreement mistake
gifts
the
anniversary couple Change preposition
to the
at the end
. Hence
, everyone was pleased with their service
.
Your service
was adorable. I wholeheartedly thank you and your staff.
Yours sincerely,
Navneet Kaur.Submitted by ss6802125 on
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Grammar
Ensure consistency in verb tenses to maintain clarity throughout the letter.
Vocabulary
Consider using synonyms to avoid repetition and enrich your vocabulary (e.g., 'service' and 'visit').
Content
Your letter effectively communicates gratitude and details of the visit, well aligning with the task's objectives.
Structure
The structure of your letter is clear, separating the details into paragraphs logically.
Tone
You have utilized a suitable and polite tone throughout the letter, which is perfect for the context.