The graph below gives information about international tourist arrivals in five countries. USA,France, malaysia, Brazil and Egypt
The given chart illustrates how international
tourists
arrived in five countries namely the USA, France, Malaysia, Brazil and Egypt.Overall
, I see the number of tourists
in the USA is the highest in the whole process. The rest of the tourist arrivals in these countries increased over time.
As the data suggested, 70 million
international tourists
travelled to the USA in 1995 and increased by 90 million
at the end
of the period. Tourist arrival in France aimed at over 30 million
at the beginning of the period, ranked second but surpassed the highest level at the end
of the period
tourist arrival in Malaysia is approximately between 20 and 40 million
tourists
over the 5- years, ranked third.And the features for Brazil and Egypt were lowest at about under 10 million
and the data for Egypt was small higher than Brazil at the end
of the beginningSubmitted by nhuquynhbn2004 on
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