The map shows the development of the village of Rye mouth between 1995 and present. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
A glance at the two maps provides the changes
of
the Village of Rye mouth between 1995 and Change preposition
in
present
.
Correct article usage
the present
Overall
, the vast majorty
of the facilities and arrangements were changed, whilst the café stayed the same.
Correct your spelling
majority
According to
the information shown on the maps, the farmland and the forest park on the east of the village in 1995 are replaced by sports facilities including golf and tennis. Besides
, the hotel stays at the same location which is across the
café and has an Change preposition
from the
addtional
car park area at present. When it comes to the Correct your spelling
additional
sea side
, both the fish market and the fishing port were removed, Correct your spelling
seaside
instead
, there are apartments in
Change preposition
at
present
time. Across the apartments are restaurants which Correct article usage
the present
were
used to be shops in 1995. What should be particularly mentioned is that the housing area is expanded and its road towards the west side is extended now.
Unnecessary verb
apply
To sum up
, it can be apparently seen that the village of Rye month
experienced a significant revision from 1995 to the present.Capitalize word
Month
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