You have been looking for a job and have seen a job advertisement for a part-time position. Write a letter to the employer. In your letter •explain why you need the job; •describe your skills and qualifications; •say what days you are available.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing
this
letter because I saw an advertisement for a part-time job, and I express my willingness to join your organisation in this
mail.
I am Sam, currently living in Toronto City in the Woodside neighbourhood for the past twenty-five years. Apart from that, I am a student at one of the prestigious universities. Currently, I am looking for a part-time position. So, I can cover my personal expenses to live in this
town.
Furthermore
, I do have one year of work experience as a Customer Service Representative from Walmart. Hence
, I do know how to handle customers even if it is a hard situation. Besides
, I achieved employee of the month three times because of my communication and other soft skills. Lastly
, I completed a plethora of professional certifications. Hence
, I can adapt to any software used by the firm.
Finally
, I would like to share my availability with your organisation. On weekdays, Tuesday and Wednesday, I will be completely occupied with my school works and reminding days, I will be completely free from 9:00am to 5:00pm.
I hope you can understand my situation and qualification. I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
KumarSubmitted by jeeveshkb22 on
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coherence cohesion
Continue to clearly structure your letters with separate paragraphs for each main idea for better coherence.
task achievement
Maintain a formal and polite tone throughout your letter for task suitability.
task achievement
For further improvement, consider providing more specific examples of your skills and how they directly relate to the job requirements.
coherence cohesion
Good use of separate paragraphs for the introduction, explanation of need, descriptions of qualifications, availability, and closing.
task achievement
The tone of the letter is suitably formal and polite, effectively meeting the requirements of the task.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite
