You are interested in enrolling in a cooking class at a local college and would like a friend to come with you. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter say where and when the class will be held give reasons why you think your friend might be interested suggest a time and place to meet to discuss the idea

Dear Lei, I came across the advertisement that I saw in our University for cooking classes. I thought of enrolling for the workshop
this
summer and I want to invite you to come with me. The class will be held in the new building of our Uni. I heard that they have
state of the art
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facilities so It'll be fun and exciting. I thought you might be interested
to join
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me since we both need to learn
this
kind of skill. It'll
also
serve as a bonding for us since we never
bond
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for decades
due to
our busy schedules. I want to meet you in the cafeteria
this
lunch if you are free, so we can talk about everything in detail. I hope that you'll be keen to attend
this
new learning as well and I can't wait to learn that skill with you. See you soon. Take care, Jane
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Incorporate more specific details about the cooking class, such as what type of cuisine might be taught, to make your argument more compelling.
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The letter is well-organized and clearly structured, making it easy to follow.
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You've done a great job expressing enthusiasm and giving personal reasons for both you and your friend to be interested in the class.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • enroll
  • local college
  • cooking class
  • schedule
  • benefits
  • learning new skills
  • diverse cuisines
  • bonding
  • shared activity
  • enrollment
  • meetup
  • discuss
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