One of your friends recently had a birthday celebration, but you missed it and you forgot to tell your friend that you couldn't attend. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: - apologise for missing the birthday celebration; - explain why you missed it and why you didn't tell your friend; - and say what you would like to do to show that you are sorry.

My dear friend, I hope
this
letter helps you understand the situation that
day
.
Firstly
, I sincerely apologize for missing your
birthday
celebration. I didn't want to miss
such
a special
day
in your life. The reason for my absence was an unexpected family situation that required my immediate attention. I found myself in a situation where, unfortunately, I lost a lot of time and forgot to inform you that I would not be able to attend your
birthday
. I regret that I cannot share your joyful
day
and offer my support on your
birthday
. To show that I'm really sorry, I would like to invite you to a
birthday
dinner or a special
day
just for the two of us. I want to show you how much your friendship means to me. Once again, I am truly sorry that I missed your
birthday
celebration and did not inform you of my absence in advance. Looking forward to spending time with you soon. Yours sincerely, Amir Ramazanov
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task response
Ensure you provide detailed explanations for your absence and apologize. It adds sincerity to the letter.
task response
Consider mentioning a specific plan for the makeup celebration to show thoughtfulness.
coherence and cohesion
Use a variety of sentence structures and linking words to improve flow between ideas.
task response
Opening with an apology and expressing hope for understanding sets a respectful tone for the letter.
coherence and cohesion
Logical structure of the letter, segregating apology, explanation, and reparative action into separate paragraphs.
coherence and cohesion
Including a closing statement looking forward to future interaction is a strong and positive way to end the letter.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • heartfelt
  • unavoidable circumstances
  • last-minute emergencies
  • caught up
  • misjudging
  • make amends
  • thoughtful
  • exclusively
  • personal letter
  • value
  • regret
  • special day out
  • arranging a surprise
  • friendship
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