a museum near your home is looking for people to do part-time voluntary/unpiad work. You would like to do some voluntary/unpaid work at the museum. Write a letter to the museum director to apply for the voluntary/unpaid work.

Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to apply for the unpaid part-time opportunity which was advertised on the museum's telegram channel a week ago. First and foremost I have to express that it would be my honour if I could be able to cooperate with the museum voluntarily which is in my field of interest.
Second,
It is worth mentioning that I have a two-year experience working at Natali Museum five years ago
therefore
, I can claim that familiarity with the tasks over there and my eagerness are my privileges in
this
regard. Ultimately, As I assume it is every individual's responsibility to aid museums in order to stand still and be shown to people all around the world, I am enthusiastically prepared to allocate some of my time to work freely for
this
section. Thank you for considering my request and I hope I will be able to initiate cooperation soon. yours faithfully, Ebrahimi Keyhan
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coherence cohesion
Maintain a clear structure with introduction, body paragraphs, and conclusion for clarity and effectiveness.
task achievement
Use varied sentence structures and vocabulary to enhance your expression.
general
Carefully proofread your letter for minor errors to ensure it is as polished as possible.
structure
You effectively introduced your purpose for writing in the opening.
content
Your enthusiasm and past experience were clearly communicated.
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