The table below shows the percentage of the population by age groups in one town who rode bicycles in 2011

the table illustrates the

percentage

of people who did bicycling in 2011 in a town and classified them

on

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different groups

according to

their

age

. at first

glance

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it is

showed

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shown

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that

s

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as

the

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age

increased the number of people who used

bicycle

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bicycles

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decreased. In general, women used

this

vehicle significantly more than men at different ages.And both groups started to

use

it again

at the end

of life. Females had the highest

percentage

of bicycle

use

until the

age

of nine years, which decreased slightly between the ages of 10 and 17. During their youth, the

use

of

this

vehicle was significantly reduced by women but again by the

age

of 60

and

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more riding

bucycle

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bicycles

gained more fans

ant

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and

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the

percentage

of using that, had a little decreased.

on the other hand

, The number of men who used

bicycke

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bicycle

bicycles

at

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first

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ten years of life was the highest, and in the second decade of their life,

this

percentage

was almost halved. The second significant decrease can be seen in the

age

group of 18-39 years old, when less than ten

percentage

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of men used

this

vehicle. the same as females,males had a slight decrease in

middle-

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middle age

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age

and old

age

and they started to

use

bicycles again,so

percentage

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the percentage

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has increased slightly