The first chart below shows the percentages of women and men in a country involved in some kinds of home tasks (cooking, cleaning, pet caring and repairing the house. The second chart shows the amount of time each gender spent on each task per day.
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The given charts display information on the percentages and time spent by males and females in the associated 4 types of
house
chores.
Overall
, men
and women
equally spend time on pet care while
more men
are involved in house
repairs than women
.
Analyzing the first bar graph, the majority of women
clean and cook in their houses than men
20 per cent. Following that, both genders have the same percentage of pet care about 20 per cent.Lastly
, men
repair their houses more than women
by more than 10 per cent.
Analyzing the second chart, it can be seen that women
spend about 85 minutes
on cooking while
men
allocate 60 minutes
for the same home task daily. Then
, 20 minutes
are given for looking after house
pets among males and females. Finally
, men
are spending 15 minutes
in
average more on Change preposition
on
house
repairs than women
, approximately 20 minutes
per day.Submitted by 6atb8k on
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